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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE 
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Of all the people I've lost before, You are the one I will miss the most. At one point in time, I admired you. Now I see it was only a charade. You pretended to be something you weren't. All of my respect for you is gone. I thought you were unique. better. You are just the same. You've proven me wrong. Thanks. Now I have the chance to better myself. The chance not to care anymore. You've given me the freedom to move on. You are nothing to me anymore. How I perceived you before doesn't change who you have become.* There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without. |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
I liked this. Some parts were a bit rough, some commas could have been used instead of periods but still, I liked it. I think all of us have had false impressions of people, and it's always sad to realize who they really are. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I can really relate to this poem, not knowing who someone really really is and then...bam...you see who they really are. Nice job! I'm gonna add it to my library.  ~Alli~ Also, just wondering...are you taking title suggestions? *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened... |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Suggest away if you wish... ~J.Lynn  There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without. |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
I say you should call it ummmm..... Change. Well thats what I would call it. Good job I can relate to this. |
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