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One last kiss
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One last kiss |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
I never thought it would end like this our last good bye and our last kiss i will really miss you its just hard to belive that our love is no longer true you were really the best you were every thing to me and cant you see that I still love you ? now here I am left all alone our whole relationship just thrown away you said you no longer loved me But thats okay Some day you'll regret this then you'll come back for one last kiss... |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
I cant believe nobody has replyed to this, I know how you feel. This was awesome. Good job |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Well...the flow was off in a couple places, and the rhyming was a little off too, but other than that, I think that this is a great poem!  Keep Posting!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened... |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
who cares about rhyming when something like this is coming from the heart..... this is beautiful... i love it.... i cant believe you havent got more replies for this.. its amazing keep up your writing.... Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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