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Teen Poetry #7

I have to be strong

red_angel*16
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since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

0 posted 2004-09-11 05:31 AM

I cant be a afraid
I cant live a lie any more
I want to be free
I'm so sick and tired of my life
I gotta let you know how I feel

But how can I tell you that this is over
I dont mean to hurt you but
I cant go on living like this
I have to be strong
I have to let you know
I have to let you go...

It's killing me to tell
you that we cant be together
because every day you tell me
that you're gonna love me forever
I can't go on living like this
Our love is gone forever...

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
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1 posted 2004-09-11 11:59 AM

Omg...I can really relate to this poem...so much.
The stanza I could most relate with was:

"But how can I tell you that this is over
I dont mean to hurt you but
I cant go on living like this
I have to be strong
I have to let you know
I have to let you go..."

Great write...keep posting!!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

red_angel*16
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

2 posted 2004-09-16 06:11 AM

thanks for your reply
your comments mean alot to me
thanks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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