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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
Lossed by it's skin A soul laid bare naked before everyone Away the soul stared How black it looked by a glancing eye Worn beyond recognition no one could deny Ridicual and judgement This pour soul endured Few offered help and fewer offered a cure The soul refused in a defiant stand "I am what i am, you understand" In a defening pitch The soul did scream "Show yourselves, all you unclean" In moments time more souls did appear All from those who judged Beause they lived in fear |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
How come this hasn't gotten a reply yet?!?! It's kinda like when people make fun of other people it's because they are insecure with themselves. That's how I saw the poem... Great poem, I think I'll add it to my library...  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened... [This message has been edited by *Alli4000* (09-09-2004 08:27 PM).] |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
I really liked it, well written keep up the good work Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me |
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