Teen Poetry #7 |
I hate This |
tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
You told me I should trust you, That I was at fault when I failed, Made me believe I was in the wrong, That I’d put up the wrong sail. I put my heart in you, Trusting with all of me, And you let me down, You aren’t what I thought you’d be. You lied to me, Promised me we’d be forever, Leading me to a wonderful dream, Of you and me together. Now I regret believing you, Thinking I was the one to blame, That I’d done something wrong, When it was you just the same. I might be easy to get over, I might be easy to forget, But hurting me like you have, Is something that you will regret. I won’t let you forget that easy, Cause it sure to heck wasn’t for me, Welcome to the hell you put me in, It’s time for you to come and see. I hated knowing you hurt, But you didn’t seem to care, You seemed to forget that I was you shoulder When no one else was there. I hate the way I loved you, I hate the way I still do, I hate the way that I still care, I hate the way I wish u did, too. -Erin Ok yeah guys my poems have been kinda down lately, I'm sorry I'm going through a hard time, uh just let me know what you think! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
The flow was a little off...but the poem itself was great. I really loved it, and could really really really relate a lot! I loved the ending. I hope everything gets better...i wish i could tell you it did, but i am not so sure myself... If you ever wanna talk, email me at [email protected] I'll be here. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
Its weird how one day someone can be your world and the next it feels like your life is over. Believe me you will get over it faster than you know, you will eventaully find someone better and you will forget about everything that happened. If you ever need anyone to talk to e-mail me at [email protected] or [email protected] |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow...I'm so sorry that you have to go through this.... If you ever want to talk: e-mail: [email protected] || aim s/n: Alli4000 This poem, like your other ones lately have been amazing, even though they are written about such sad things. :| ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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I_dont_know_me Junior Member
since 2003-12-08
Posts 48UK, Cymru |
I hate the way I loved you, I hate the way I still do, I hate the way that I still care, I hate the way I wish u did, too. i loved this bit altho it wasnt really in tune with the poem it still gave it a nice ending! i love all ur poems an its ok be 2 sad! i feel like this at the moment but remember dont cry because its over smile because it happened! ~Emma~ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
We all know what you are going through because we've all been there. Very expressive poem--keep your head up and it'll all work out. ~sky So you go and make it happen |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
this totally brings me back wow i love it this verse was the one i truely can relate to Now I regret believing you, Thinking I was the one to blame, That I’d done something wrong, When it was you just the same. |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
wow...I know how exactly ya feel...he will realize what he lost...they always do... |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
adding to my library I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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