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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
inside why cant anyone see the feeling that i have inside it hurts when they tease they just cant feel the feeling that i have inside they look they cause trouble they do things that they must if only i had my way... please write me a comment or wat i should have done |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Welcome to Passions. Your poem was great...  and I know how you feel...I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting) ~Alli~ *Alli4000* - Moderator/Passions In Poetry *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
welcome  and as far as what you should have done? Do you mean as far as your poem? Nothing hon, just write your heart... |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
thanks for your reply's on my poem. i wrote this poem because i was teased alot when i was a bit younger. Christine |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done and written straight from your heart. Welcome to Passions! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
I liked this, and as far as what you should have done? nothing, poetry is about writing what you feel and becoming better at showing what you feel and that's what you did. Awesome Job and welcome to the forum! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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