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WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2004-08-28 11:28 PM

beyond the shadowed horizon
lies the naked truth of the past-
i cannot fix what happened-when
i try to forget, memories
re-enter my weakened mind.
darkness becomes my enemy
and i struggle to fight back
but am unsuccessful.
people watch as i tremble
and fall-never offering their hand.
but i get up and brush
the dirt off and move along
my pass to success.
in my unconcious mind lies
the key to my past...

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-08-28 11:31 PM

hmmm....i cannot really think of a name, weakened memories popped into my head, buit i dont know.

I really liked this though, amazing write.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

2 posted 2004-08-28 11:38 PM

thank you...

i'm not sure what to call it...i just write, i never really give titles lol.

thank you again...

-kirah

peace love and happiness

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2004-09-01 10:07 PM

disillusioned.

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

4 posted 2004-09-01 10:12 PM

very nice

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2004-09-02 01:04 AM

Hey! Nice to be seeing you around here again.
I really love this one, ALOT. Might be my favorite of yours.
I like disillusioned for a title. Or maybe, Struggle for Answers?
Hope to see more from you soon!