Teen Poetry #7 |
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It's not that Easy |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world ![]() |
Rainy days, cloudy skies, a windowless world. I can't look out into my life. It's not that easy. I can't be the viewer. I can't look into my life and say what the simple alternative looks like. It's not that easy. I have to be inside the picture, watched within. I have to feel the hurt pain love emotions and all that can't always be seen from the window; can't be seen by the viewer. I can't stop the rain, before it falls on me, to escape to the safty of a window to watch it fall from the inside, avoiding all that is involved. It's not that easy. Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I cant beleive no one has replied to this yet!!! Grrr...i hate it when that happens. Very amaizing write. It is absolutely unbeleivable that no one replied to this. I cant wait to hear more. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
I agree with Kissa yet again, why dont people respond to all the good ones. Keep it up |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
How did I miss this?!? I can't believe I did! ![]() Well...better late then never. ![]() This poem was great! I loved it! I'm going to add it to my library. ![]() ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
wow this was great! it painted mental images in my head of what you were describing! i cant wait to hear more of your stuff! |
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