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The dreams where i die..are the best i ever had
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The dreams where i die..are the best i ever had |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket 
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beauty had always been with those eyes before voices moving forward through each memory we distort running out together like abandoned children we pour down through perfection the lives we created love to assume everything holds until the sheets are removed our own ominous intentions now lay stranded between the morning be began to notice on a page i was meaning to send rain falls from the tall chair downstairs preparations are the first shots to be heard resisting unnanounced we escape to conversation this is not a threat continue trailing off The plaster dented from you fist..In the hall where you had your first kiss..Reminds you that the memorys wont fade |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
our own ominous intentions now lay stranded between the morning be began to notice on a page i was meaning to send I like this - reminds me of some of my own experiences I like your writing - this one is so sad - I look forward to reading more of your postings |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
god, you are good. really good. "everything holds until the sheets are removed" loved that line. |
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