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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
Sorry I haven't written in a long time. But this is something I need comments on. Confessions When I first met you, I realized we had more in common than we had thought. When in confidence you asked for my help, I realized for the first time that you loved me. When you told me you were leaving, I realized that I truly did love you, too. When it was time to say good-bye, I realized I couldn't let you leave without ever knowing. So, here's my confession: Adam, I love you. I have all along. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
So the guy is leaving and you're going to tell him you love him. Is it truly love? That's one question to ask yourself... besides that- the poem did speak to me. Especially the end, and no, my name isn't Adam unfortunately lol  However, id like to say that you can definitely add to this if you're contemplating on giving this to him or not. It was a good write! Keep it up  I left my wallet in El Segundo... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Yes, if you are planning on giving it to him, i would add sum to it, but it is still a very good poem, and i could see a lot of emotion, in just those few words. Keep it up, and i hope everything works out... Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
Thank you for replying guys. Actually, this poem was written the day after we both said good-bye. It was written as my way to deal. I told Adam face to face that I love him; part of me always will. he was an amazing person. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
awww. i know i alraedy replied, but aww.... A guy freind of myne is moving in a a couple weeks, and i really like him, and i think i might love him. I dont know what to do. If it would be easier to just let him go, or what, and latrely he has been acting different. (bad different) It is almost like he is pushing me away... Anyways. amazing write, i thought i would bump this back up... Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
your poem "confession" is so sweet i have felt like this last year. a guy who i really liked moved and i couldn't bring myself to tell him how i feel and every day i wonder wat would have happened if i told him. this poem is a thumbs up!!! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
How did I miss this poem?!!?! Wow, I can relate alittle... I moved a few years ago and there was a guy named Max that I left behind. I've always wondered what would have happened if I would have told him....  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
Thank you. The people that I meet in here through poetry are the reason why I keep coming back; even if I have nothing new to add. Much Love goes out to everyone. |
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