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Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

0 posted 2004-07-01 10:11 PM

I feel lonely
I feel no one care
I miss the name
I miss the kind eyes with warm touch
I’m alone in home, the nightfall gives the taste of lonely
The live is being a little village, I got out of the matches box with a fear of burning inside
I’m walking on the road, don’t know where I have to go
The lights are focusing on me, like someone elect you to be the star of the day
The lonely is accompany me, even thought the lights are doing.
The road is not ended like a circle, while I’m walking and my feelings are falling.
Its being I’m not that one only walkalone
I have just touched two similar eyes
Two souls are walking into each other
Its not a glance or look but stare
The attraction of the pure soul was it where no words are spelled
Two souls stood facing like they are winking
Two lips are tightly closing, two eyes staring are linking. Two hands are sprawling to touch
Is she touching my soft face like a blonde to sense the life
The breeze of night is talking us teaching how can you be close with a honest in heart
No speak just hisses
The road is crowding but we were alone in the nest
The steps became heavy ain’t to endthis dumbfound
The breath is hardly going out
The heart is beating with no sound
The life is walking but its stopping
The wind of her touched me while she was passing beside me
Asking to talk, killthis afraid inside no embarrass will happen
I just stood feeling this warm of her wind looking behind
While my eyes are closing and my mouth is going to talk but the tears fall on mouth to shut it up killing this moment of love.
Just the warm has been exist but the romance body is gone
Just it’s a caught eyes!!!

[This message has been edited by Rommance_Touch (07-02-2004 08:34 AM).]

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

1 posted 2004-07-02 10:48 PM

"The attraction of the pure soul was it where no words are spelled"

I like this line, but the rest...idk I don't really get it...It was kinda confusing. Matbe it's just me...idk. Sorry I don't have anything constructive to say. Thanks for the read though.
Jen

"The course of true love never did run smooth." -William Shakespeare

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-07-02 10:57 PM

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

[This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (07-03-2004 03:20 PM).]

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