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Teen Poetry #7

Life - Who Decides?

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-06-27 11:01 PM

So, I have no life?
According to whom?
To you?
Well let me tell you a little something
I HAVE a life…
It’s mine.
I love it.
Every second.

I have friends.
I do…
But they don’t rule me
They don’t tell me who I am
How I should act
What I should wear
How I should think

I decide how I spend my time
How I live my life.
YOU choose to conform
To be just like everyone else
Your priorities…
Your morals…
They are not your own.
They are society’s.
They are fickle.
You do just what you are told to do
To think
And how to act

Don’t tell me I have no life.
I have MY life.
I chose it.
Not you.

A life without love…is no life at all.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-06-27 11:12 PM

i really enjoyed this poem ,,,,i truly did ,,i felt it was full of anger but its still awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,,,just hang in there u will make it i promise,,, and i love ur signature ,,,,,,its greattttttt

love and respect

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

a123
Member

since 2004-03-27

Posts 72

2 posted 2004-06-28 01:54 PM

hey....i like this....hmmm wht else shd i say?

anyway, since im a at a loss of words today (dont knw if its got to do with ur poem or its just me)

love
a123

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2004-06-28 01:57 PM

Thanks for replying guys. Im glad you like it.

A life without love…is no life at all.

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

4 posted 2004-06-28 02:21 PM

I really like it. I can feel strong emotions in it as well. Very good!
Keep it up.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-07-05 01:10 AM

I can really relate to this........hmmmm.......ummm.....
I'm just so speechless at this piece. I love it. Thanks for sharing.

~Alli~

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2004-07-05 05:33 AM

Thanks a lot =) It feels good to have gotten that off my back.

A life without love…is no life at all.

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