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"Indigo"
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"Indigo" |
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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113
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not quite purple, nor blue. She awaits, & hesitates knowing it will never come as always.... *** * you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hmm... well to be completely honest i have no idea with this poem was about, but that didn't stop me from liking it. the length was cool, and i liked the rhymey part. groovy. keep posting bergundy "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I agree with fearing-laughter...I'm kinda confused to what the poem is about, but I found it very intriguing. ~Alli~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hmmmm.....this poem is so open to interpretation that I will just take what I did from it in a very general way. Whatever you're waiting for....whatever never comes.....sometimes it does- but you didn't know it was there until it vanished. Regardless of what you meant, this poem is very thought-provoking. Me likes  -javi- "One good thing about music: when it hits you feel no pain"- Bob Marley |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I always think that about indigo - which way should I go - not quite one, not quite the other. If you were talking about indigo alone I get it...I'm supposing one could apply that principle to life sometimes Its good to just appreciate indigo for indigo- its just so beautiful  |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
well done. i like the abstract openness of this. so many interpretations, which one to choose? anyway, good work. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
The best way to write is to keep the interpretation open. Please don't explain to us what this is about. Let them draw their own conclusions. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
It got my little mind working... I like it. ~lol~ Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow this is really good, short yet complex, like the ones I use to do. Juju |
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