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I cant help loving you!
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I cant help loving you! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
If you only know how much i miss you, If you would only understand what the word love in my eyes means.. If only i can trust you to give you my heart, you have'nt seen me yet,and hope never. If only you would just leave me and never come back, Thats my dream, and thats what i believe. If only you would understand how hard the world is when your involve.. I cant help loving you, now or ever, Even though there are people that are stopping me ,,but never stopping my heart, There are days i feel like dying but whn i think of you ,nothing matters , All i want is for you to be happy and live in life as your living with me,,... I cant help loving you, what can i do? should i keep trying to forget you? ----------------------------------- some of you may not understand this poem,,,its means alot to me but just try to understand it.. please,, love and respect I will cover you with my blood,not only because i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color.... [This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (05-23-2004 12:25 PM).] |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Very good! I can kinda sorta understand what your getting at here, its a very good poem. Awesome work! |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
I understand...very good, something I have experienced and you put it very well in this poem. Good job "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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