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Setting you free
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Setting you free |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86
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This is killing me, repeatedly. But In the end, It was the right choice. I Believe deep down, It was Never meant to be. No matter how much I hurt, You will be happy. And thats all that matters. I've become numb to all the emotions You make me feel. I just want to see you smile. I'd sacrafice everything just because... I love you. My feelings for you are strong. You'll never understand it. That's why I'm saying goodbye. Have fun with your Miss. Perfect Have no fear I'll be no where near. I won't be in the way, I'll scream silently... So Forget about me Leave me behind I'm setting you free. I'm setting you free, From the gates of my heart. I won't spend my days Shedding tears Because I want you I'm setting you free, I'm setting myself free. ----------------------------- Inspiration: I did a small favor for my best guy friend who I love, and because of me being a good friend, my favor turned into him being with someone else. And the funny part is I knew if I did him this favor, This would happen. I would go into detail but its a blah story. Anyways tell me what you think. (CENSORED) |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Wow, I really felt the emotion and love here. Really good job, I love how you said you would do anything to see him smile, I really can relate to that. "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
Hiiiiiiii.....yr the best i think who is the leave who love and then love another....hes an EMPTY Heart...He doesnt deserve you..... Nice Job ~~~Rommance_Touch~~~ ~~Not_Ended~~ |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
I'd sacrafice everything just because... I love you. My feelings for you are strong. You'll never understand it. That's why I'm saying goodbye. Have fun with your Miss. Perfect Have no fear I'll be no where near. I won't be in the way, I'll scream silently... So Forget about me I really liked the above stanzas. I can really relate to this poem . . . Anyways, great write. Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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