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Teen Poetry #7

I miss you soo much!!!

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-21 08:46 PM

Im missing the old days,
dont you get it?

I miss you ,I need you, is'nt that enough?,
I love you deep down my heart,,

i truly miss the talks ,the laughs,,even the smiles that made me dream but never come back,

I miss you, I need you to keep me alive to make me dream and wonder,please!!

Come back ,give me the hug ,th smile, the laugh ,,

you were here , like an umbrella when it rained you covered me,
when it was hot ,,you cooled me up,.
when it was cold you held me warm ..
when i was in a place where i dont feel good,,you made me feel like at home,,

WHEN I WAS DEPressed you made me smile and made me feel like needing you is what i want...

BUT WHAT can i say?
I still love you!! AND alwayz willl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-22 12:43 PM

I like it, I can feel the emotion very well.
Good Job!

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

2 posted 2004-05-22 12:47 PM

I know those feelings too good..
Great poem - it tells my feelings..

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