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Forgive me.
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Forgive me. |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA 
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I look far back in my mind, I can see such a sweet time. I can remember how it felt, but starting to forget, what’s its like To have your arms wrapped around me so tight. To hear you whisper in my ear so sincerely. You have something so special about you I just cant seem to figure out, And it gets me all twisted up, in a way I cannot come down. I love the way you make me laugh, The way you make me cry, the way you make me miss you. As a matter of fact I can’t believe it’s been so long since I’ve kissed you. And as I sit here alone thinking about the past, I have to stop and think if your angry about the words I said to you last. Now you may make think me childish for missing you so much, Cause really its only been two weeks for the both of us. I can’t wait till this weekend; I get to see you at last. I look forward to that day which wont come fast. I love you Thomas. Please forgive me for being so rash. I wrote this to my bf after we had a little fight and I said some not nice things…I just wanted to let him know I don’t hate him, not at all…any comments you have on how I may improve it would really be appreciated, Thanks! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
woooooooooooooowwwwwwwwww..nicee keep it upp.love and respect I will cover you with my blood,not only because |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
so beauty, especially i like a girls who applogize...i hope he can see this words, or mail him, to sense u..... hope 4 u a nice life ~~~Romance_Touch~~~ ~~Not_Ended~~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
wow...great poem....i loved it!  ~Alli~ |
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