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Teen Poetry #7

thinking of you

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

0 posted 2004-05-19 06:49 AM

listenig to a song
and i think of you
laying in bed
and i dream of you
i wish you were here
with me now
i wish i could tell you
how i feel right now

but i dont want to loose
the best friend
ive ever had

but then again
i dont want to
keep my feelings
hidden in darkness
away from the light

i dont want to regret
not saying anything
for the rest of my life

your not just like a brother
your not just my best mate
your the only guy i know
to be real, true and decent

i think your the only one for me.....

i wrote this when i realised how much i really love a guy ive known since i was about 3 years old.... we are like brother and sister but without the hissy fights every week

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-05-19 09:05 PM

wow... I wish i could love someone that is that close to me. But i move around too much. This was a very lovely poem. I could feel your emotions very well.
Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

2 posted 2004-05-19 10:38 PM

Very good! I like it tons! I remember feeling that way towards a guy once and oh man, that was really interesting hehe...I hope all works out!!!
Awesome Job!

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2004-05-20 04:40 AM

thankyou for the replies

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

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