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Teen Poetry #7

Amoungst The Crowd

thinktwice
Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

0 posted 2004-05-17 12:09 PM

Amounst the crowd
The gaze is freed
Attention tied down
The silence decieved

Under the surface
Beasts lay sleeping
Waiting for purpose
To awake from dreaming

The signs of life
Sedate the mood
The struggles, the fights
Desperately elude

The moment passes
And shackles released
Only the dust, the ashes
Remain to be seen

And as the breeze
Hastes to restore
A minute passes
And time is restored

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-05-17 01:02 AM

this poem was amazing keep it upp awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...love and respect

peace

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

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