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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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Completly ignored, how's that's supposed to feel? I know, I've felt it, I know it is real. Do you know how it feels, to be the reject, to be the one ignored, to be the one nobody will accept? I don't think you do, You have no clue, You might be my best friend and I'll always stick up for you. I stick up for you, I'm always there by your side. But sometimes when it comes to me, you'd rather just ignore and hide. But it looks to me, as if you won't do the same, am I just one of those friends, you use as a name? I'm sick of being forgotten, I'm sick of not being heard, I'm sick of living in the shadows, people not hearing a word. I might not be a superstar, but I'm a someone too, I deserve the same respect that I have given to you. Sorry, kind of a venting poem. My friend was kind of being a jerk today and not listening to what I was saying and I wrote this because of my feelings about it.Let me know what you think! -Erin "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
this poem is amazing .,,,,im saving rather u like it or not[lolol,,kidding ] wellll keeep up the greatest work ...love and respect peace I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
oh wow.. I can relate to this soo.. much. Especially right now. My "best friend" never really shows any respect for me, and it jsut seems like we are growing apart, and it feels like she is dumping me. The reasons.. well i know why, but it is too long of a story to go into right now. If you ever want to talk.. jsut email me. i could use sum 1 to talk to if ya know what i mean... kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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sparrow139 Junior Member
since 2004-05-13
Posts 18UK |
Good poem, I really like it. The rhythm of the words really carries it through.  [sparrow] |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
Oh!! This poem means a lot to me! I loved it, especially; ยด"I stick up for you, I'm always there by your side. But sometimes when it comes to me, you'd rather just ignore and hide." That's how I feel sometimes too. Keep writing, I love your poems. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great poem...I can really relate to it. ~Alli~ |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Thanks for replying. This one is prolly one of the ones I figured alot of people would be able to relate to. I'm glad you liked it! "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wow, really amazing piece. You got your emotions across very well. I can really relate to this one. Thanks for sharing. W.W. |
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