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Let me go.
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Let me go. |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA 
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I laugh when I think about the moments we shared. But I cry when I think about those moments that are no longer there. It kills me to think that no matter what I do, I can never have you back. I don’t know what to do. I can’t really think You have me in a fog. I am trying to find to get free. Can’t you see? I just want to be me! No, I don’t think you can. And I just wanted to let you know, Cause you; yourself have been caught in a dream, Somehow you just can’t see. I have found some one new, And I love him like I once loved you. I have let you go without looking back, Just like you I turned my back. I have found some one new, And I hope you can too. Cause I only want the best for you. Just leave me alone, Please, I beg of you. Just please let me go! I know it’s hard, but you can do. Just let me go so you can be you! I know you love me, But I thought you forgot. That’s why I let go, But now there's no going back. I know you will be fine, Even though I don’t call you mine. Just please let me go!!! I wrote this poem for my ex boyfriend...He still loves me a lot and I really dont know what to do. He broke up with me and now I have found some one new! any comments would really help me out!!! Thanks |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
this is amazingg......its soo ttrue and real,,,welll keep it upp...i love ur poemss... love and respectt peace I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die... |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Thanks, you always reply to my poems and I jsut wanted to tell you that Im glad some one does. cause I dont think they are all that great. Thanks |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow. Great write...nice job!  ~Alli~ |
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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
O-M-G!!!! I'm having about the problem right now w/ my ex. I broke up w/ him and he's still totoaly obsessed. Very cool peom. Keep writing. |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
mmmm...i liked it. and then i didn't. i don't know. but it was a good poem and a good message...i think just the way it came across to me. but i still liked it. thats kinda of odd... but o well... good write ^_^! riley no matter what i'll always love you |
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