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If only people loved others like they loved there lovers,!
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If only people loved others like they loved there lovers,! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
If only people ,loved each other like they love there lives... would'nt everything be soo great without cuting us with there knives? If only people ,loved each other like they loved there lovers.. would'nt everything be covered with there own recovers? If only people ,loved each other like they loved nature... would'nt everything be soo judged by its nature? ,i wish the world had the taste and i had the flavor.. people say life is'nt easy , live it while your studying it.. how can i fit in it or atleast get it when i dont have abit from it.?? i cant love it when i hate it ,i cant make it better when everyone loves it..im just going with the style and JUST looking for the files, so i could run a mile , without one tear . and just dare to dream.. i want to pass the year. and and see everything so clear... so i could just be here for you. AS a friend,sister,mother,wife,daughter ,just to show you the true meaning of me and you, being two..... would'nt everything be soo full of water? and tastes like spring water? so lets just live in style, because without style there will never be a while. WITHout feeling hate ,there will never be one soul mate... or atleast feeling joy of being with that boy and you know he cant ever distroy.... I love this cherry that i recall my world's starwberry. .... I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die... I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why.. [This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (05-12-2004 09:56 PM).] |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Hey I'm not sure what to say about this one. I like it, but I just dont really know what to say. I can feel the emotion very well. Good Job! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Kinda weird poem, but nonetheless a good write.  ~Alli~ |
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