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some say love!
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some say love! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
some say love,it is a bird that flys so free in this sweet earth, some say love ,it is a soul ,that dances every night and day to keep us alive. sOMe say love it is a smile ,that allows us to laugh with so much joy and happiness into our hearts, SOME say love it is a kiss that never ends . SOME SAY love it is a flower ,that changes its colors every night and day. But i say love is my soul that i call you. |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
I liked the last line the most, i also liked how you compared it to other things, love is all that and so much more, nice work! ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
that was short and great!love is the most complicated word in the dictionary...no doubt. Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Like everyone else said, cute poem...  Just wondering where you have been for the last couple months...come back to passions soon!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
nice one and good to see you writing again... this is really good.... i love the conparisons you have put into this and i love the way it flows... leaving each line to sink in.... beautiful write.. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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