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Teen Poetry #7

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wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2004-05-09 02:55 AM

You can break my heart
into a million peices
but, i will still run
back to you

I find you as a release
I can't do that with anyone else
your my excuse
to be as dumb as I am

every night i dream of you
every story i tell is about you
at first i was just using you
now i find myself falling in love

what are you intentions?
could you make them clear?
I want to be with you
I don't know how to tell you

If only you were here
could read this
know my love is here
if only...

I can't be your superman

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

1 posted 2004-05-09 05:51 AM

Funny Work...it let me smile...but say what do u feel...a time carry out so fast...there wont be an execuse...Tell what do u feel...But if u feel he shares u...Have a nice Life and Love

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-05-09 02:47 PM

its a very nice poem keep up the great work..

love and respect

A Friend's love says:
" If you ever need anything,
I'll be there."

True Love says:
" You'll never need anything;
I'll be here."

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

3 posted 2004-05-09 09:04 PM

the poem flowed well. i enjoyed it. keep up the good work

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

4 posted 2004-05-11 07:00 PM

Malloree, Malloree, Malloree... I really hope he has good intentions. I hate seeing you getting hurt... I assume this is about who I think it is. You know I'm always here for you, and I know you deserve a good guy and a good relationship, so I really hope this is it. Thanks for posting.

- C.K. Natland -

Nobody Is Perfect Until You Fall In Love With Them.

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