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Teen Poetry #7

Unexpected Love

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

0 posted 2004-05-08 05:32 AM

Someday I found here while I was suffering the net
Passed days I forget her
Come days she suddenly come on again
I talked her
  She is like a flower
  She was winging around
  Her face shine like a sun
I felt her
  Her hand touched my heart
  Her eyes looking at my eyes
  Her lips touched my lips
Liked her
  I gave her a huge
  I gave her a kiss
  I waked up it was a sweet dream

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-05-08 01:12 PM

this is just lovely, Welcome to Passions...

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

2 posted 2004-05-08 02:42 PM

Thanks GreenEyes. I hope it be better the next time

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-05-08 03:00 PM

wow,i love this poem..lolol..its greatt,,keep it upp ..

lovezz peaceeee

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-05-08 08:13 PM

It was an amazing write. I loved it.

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

5 posted 2004-05-09 07:11 PM

thx kissa~rachelle for yr comment...i hope to c yrs soon

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