Deja Vu... from a past love

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Teen Poetry #7

Deja Vu... from a past love

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2005-10-02 06:15 PM

Faint    tingling      on the edges of my conscious
     Deja Vu
from a past love
     Deja Vu
of a familiar suffering
    Impossible!
Pains that dissopated to mere    passing thoughts
    sweet    sweet perfume
        my hands     quiver
   lulling sound of gentle words
whispered in the shadows
   Treasured moments
       coveted
As they whisk away on Earth's breath
   barely    visible
in the cold  air
    Left
   pressed against the panes
        grabbing    at nothings    in the wind

"Aerials, in the sky,
When you lose small mind,
You free your life."
- System of a Down

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2005-10-06 10:44 PM

good. i had this awesome mental image. it was so hideous. wonderfully done.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2005-11-07 05:16 PM

it shouldn't be hideous lol is that the impression everyone is getting from this? It's actually supposed to symbolize the rebirth of a faded love...???

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