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Teen Poetry #7

Tears Of A Broken Heart

SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

0 posted 2004-05-06 04:25 PM

Tears of a Broken Heart

You've shattered my heart

Time and time again

You've torn my soul apart

And yet you don't care

I've loved you for far to long

Though, I know I really shouldn't

But I just can't move on

I can't forget your face

I'm not sure why I feel this way

And when people ask me why

I can't find anything to say

As if the words were never there

So, you continue to love another

While you toss me aside

I don't know why I even bother

You'll never see me, until it's too late

I wish you'd stop staring at me

From across the room

It makes me cry to know we can never be

Just you and me, me and you

Why do I still love you so

All you've done is hurt me

Why can't I just let you go

I can't, I love you to much

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-06 04:37 PM

Wow I can really relate to this...I felt this way towards my ex boyfriend...
I really liked it,
good job!

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-05-06 04:43 PM

Very beautiful.. i know how you feel.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

3 posted 2004-05-07 11:20 PM

Wow, nice poem, it was awesome, deffiently something to realate too

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

4 posted 2004-05-08 12:19 PM

wow...keep writng gr88 poem

peace

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

5 posted 2004-05-08 01:01 AM

Really Really Good.

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