Teen Poetry #7 |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
He whispers softly in your ear and starts to pull you near you're so lost in his eyes that you miss his disguise and his kind words you don't hear. His hands slide up your thighs and you let out a soft sigh thinking that he's a god when really you're so far off and should be questioning why. The lights are turned down low it's just you and him alone he kisses you so hard and you can't tell in the dark but all of your morals have flown. |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
ahh... i reallly like this "love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die" |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Wow, great job! Keep up the good work! |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmmm... I enjoyed every part of this. especially the end. the connection between literal blindness and figurtive. |
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