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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-10-01 06:59 PM

Forgive me for saying this,
But I must tell you my side,
Thought I would stay strong,
But without love, I am so lost,

The person that was meant for me,
Has left me for sure,
Months have passed without seeing her,
And she will no longer recall missing me,

She has moved on to someone else now,
A love that was forbidden, is now forgotten,
Who do I turn to now?
Others like me suffer night and day,

Each of us now broken down,
Left here to be made a fool,
Love is for those who believe in fairy tales,
And I am now part of that tale,

No sin is greater than losing your first chance,
The first love is hard to get over,
But never forgotten indeed,
We are the proofs of a thousand broken souls,

Clenched from our heart the love that was whole,
For a broken heart is hopeless,
Spinning in the web of denial,
Unravel me from it-

Don’t leave us behind,
For we are the true warriors-
That survived through this hell,
To tell you the tale of lovers land.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

1 posted 2005-10-04 07:31 AM

this is hard for me to read because i am on the dealing end of something like what your going through here... its breaks my heart to know this is how much women can affect the men we love....
beautiful write now i know how you feel when we break your hearts
keep them coming
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

StarryEyed3
Member

since 2005-06-26

Posts 58
bostonia

2 posted 2005-10-04 04:44 PM

"We are the proofs of a thousand broken souls"

i really love this line- very powerful. and this poem makes me feel like you need a hug...
anyway, great write.

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..." -death cab

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2005-10-04 07:46 PM

Very nice write...

It's great to come back here and read your work.

~Alli~

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