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Teen Poetry #7

My star

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2004-05-02 06:23 PM

You are my star that I wish upon,
You are my earth that I live upon,

The sweet smell of your perfume
Leaves me wanting more,

To hold you and to caress,
Body of yours and mine,

Entwine as one being,
That will last but a lifetime,

For no second is wasted,
Now that your love I have tasted,

The soft skin that is like silk,
And the motions are just right,

With your pearly whites,
You make the worst times all right,

Time will pass and I will grow old,
Without your company, I will be cold,

So let me ask as often-young lovers do,
If I treat you right, will you love me too?

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

1 posted 2004-05-04 11:02 PM

Ahhh

love is beautiful eh?
great display of emotions here

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

2 posted 2004-05-04 11:33 PM

This poem is really cute!
keep it up!

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