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Death By Silver
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Death By Silver |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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'neath the throes of Babylon's weeping far 'cross where the wisteria twines and weaves around my throat fingers of sweetened green oh, unknowing suicide of a nation.. it looms. pausing with a quiet breath to saturate and flavor heaven all those little pieces of you falling through my soul as rain vainglory of the sun moon-colored eyes and bottled stars color me silver bleed me thoroughly, as the ink fades from black to an indigo hue tears on shadowed roses spill forth and you you who chronically tastes of silver stains my delicate skin with invisible sighs of wind drawing pencil lines acquitted of an artist's hand their sin is unmentionable scents to linger on my own fingers why these roses, like fragrant ghosts of.. a silvery song I inhale there is silence in argentine seeping under a silver sky morning never wakens she is forged into another dream a sweet, sweet death by silver lies For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet" [This message has been edited by IndigoEve (10-18-2003 05:17 PM).] |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good onnnnnnneeeeeeeeee. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
VERY good for being a 15 year old's work. Personally when I was 15 my work was horrible and not matured at all. This one was awesome, and the title is really catchy  |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Wow!! Now what was I going to say... oh yeah, wow!! I've only seen this style (if you will) of writing twice now. It's all rare to me so enjoy this gift that you have and i will continue to enjoy your writings; I'm just so amazed. NJS |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
A lot to like in this excellent write! Asia |
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