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fallen_star1715 Junior Member
since 2003-06-25
Posts 18 |
My life u wrecked its now destroyed You messed with my heart like it was a toy Why must you do it again and again now my soul will never mend Your always hurting me for what....?? love I knew love hurt but not this much then u tell me ill miss your touch? You say you have the world on ur shoulders i tell you its not its just way ur carrying it but why?? why do u take it out on me?? its jus not fair obviously this isnt meant to be You treat me like this i want to runaway but u tell me i want to go inland to the closest bay Why is life so hard? why does it make us cry? Why do we always seem to pic the wrong card? I always screw up because of u jus leave me alone and please just go home!!! |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
The wrong card indeed, perhaps it is the deck then the card in essence. I liked the questions, they just feel the need to be answered and not subdued with petty statements. Very nice. NJS |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You really wrote a lot of emotion out in this poem. If it's from your own personal experience, I do hope that things are better about the situtation soon.  Hugs to you  Ethel |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
hmmmm, destroyed. good onnnnnneeeeeeee. |
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