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Fire and Ice
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Fire and Ice |
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Petey Junior Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
Fire and Ice My heart is a fire That burns in this forest of me. Alone and undisturbed, it is contained. Your heart is frozen As cold as ice. Cool and calm it remains. You came into my life And your Arctic winds blew But you didn’t snuff my burning My fire just grew. Burning hotter and faster In inner natural disaster. I am consumed And I want to make you see That only your frozen heart Can stop my burning. My fire you’ll quench And your frozen heart I’ll warm. Otherwise, my heart will burn Until my forest is gone. Those who live by the sword, get shot by those who don't. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
I like this write,,,holds much truth,,,,,the hard part,,,is getting those two extremes together, without one overcoming the other into nothingness,,,, Michelle |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
That poem was one of the deepest poems I've ever read. GREAT job....I loved it!!!  ~Alli~ |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
i'm not usually into the deep poems, but i liked this one. good job. bergundy "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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