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When I'm Away
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When I'm Away |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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"...and if you see her, tell her it's over..." Live in simple sentences disjointed thoughts unrelated events unconnected abstract ideas that do not necessarily leave you unaffected but more so wondering what it was that made you so self concious what makes you want to have those simple little secrets. "....I want a girl who will laugh for no one else..." Wonder yourself away from the tangible calloused and bruised world and into the clouds and wish you knew why you put so much hope into something so much trust and love into a not sure thing where you will be left wondering, at least, for a little while, if what was meant to be will be. "...when I'm away she never leaves the house..." If only it were easier to say be the love of my life everything I'll ever hold dear to me share the world and the stars with wake up to see your face on my pillow and never realize if you are unrealistic if I am being fair or selfish this relationship is... "...you know it makes me sad to see her like that..." (a/n: lyrics=weezer "no one else") |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
nice. i enjoyed every bit of it. the poem seemed to flow well and i also enjoyed the weezer references the blue album rocks nice use of muffin |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Don_Juan - I've got the entire blue album stuck in my head, playing on repeat in order. It's quite awesome. Thanks for replying! Weezer is awesome. |
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