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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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this is just something kinda crazy...just cause sometimes guys think that they are all that and that a girl can't beat them.... i'm the rebel always looked down on because i am different i don't wear the right kind of clothes i couldn't spend hours on my hair doin it just right every morning just to impress no one and i don't mind my make-up running half way down my face... it gives me an individual look when i glance at the mirror i'm a little country walkin around in torn jeans saturday and sunday somedays i just don't feel like trying and throw my hair up i'll walk around with no shoes on somedays no fingernail polish to make me look sophisticated when i'm not i'm an athlete don't you think you'll catch me in a skirt anyday 'cause i got to many scrapes and bruises up and down my legs maybe i'll have a black eye by the time the game is through and if you come out with none then you didn't play hard enough.... i'll give my 100 percent to anything i try and trust me if i wanted to i could beat anyone... i'm a girl with one kickin attitude don't get me mad by sayin there something i can't do because anything you challenge me too i'll do it just for fun and if you wanna say one nasty thing to me it'll come back to haunt you one day... when you see me standing on your front porch... challenging you to play... i'm sitting in the dark....waiting... |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked this very much  It flowed just right to me..good ideas nice write.Im a child. |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
"Walking around in torn jeans" I like this; it reminds me of me! It's a good thing to be proud of looking different; you and I both have the right to look exactly how we want, so why not go crazy!  "Where paper cuts, and bloody hands, In the middle, they will meet" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
You expressed all your feelings very well and the poem flowed good. Great job!!! ~Alli~ |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Rock on girl, I all of a sudden have this huge urge to go blast van Halen and get my soccer ball out! I loved this, it brought a huge smile to my face and I really needed that! ~Live and Laugh~ The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
glad everyone liked it! heh! riley no matter what i'll always love you |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86 |
Great job! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
this poem ,,,,im soo glad that i read it ,,its wonderful ,awesome keep it uppp |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Atta girl |
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