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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys 
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Grouse Tell me have you seen her? Tell me have you seen her? I cant call it, been there, been alcoholic- Waiting for the next straw to fall out of the sky, Face one diving, to the ground, as if in slow motion A notion not much but for emotion, coasting on the next High I turn to. I learned to self medicate at an early age Wage war against myself on hopes of one day being Protected, not sequestered from the rest of you. This low I feel is going nowhere, trapped. I’m breaking down to the foundation of this Sole, my feet become bare, standing there In a pool if disillusion, disbelieving, discontent. It’s not going to be aright tomorrow, It’s not going to be “All rizzle fo shizzle”… Speak to me like a dropout get treated like a dropout. You stole my women and I want her back, You broke her apart and not for the better. She’s dumber, she’s ugly, the up and coming kids Don’t know how to respect her, they neglect her. She deserves better, lets bring it back to the romance, Romantics…a thing many know not of… A time of love for her, every ounce of thought Was made in respect of her, not in neglect of her. Make sure you don’t fall. She flies high and most don’t Have the license to fly. Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
every word of this pounds the pavement this beat cant be missed and i think its an awesome incredible display of what you are capable of. damn good job buddy  |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Great to see you posting again, great write. Hollow. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hey eor, Emotion packed as usual. Excellent write as usual. Good to hear from you, I've been hanging around some other sites. What ever happened to littlewing? poe If nothing is something |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
It seems to me, it could almost be two different poems. Because your talking about, you then your talking about her. But it works. "This low I feel is going nowhere, trapped." That's probably how I feel right now. I always like the stuff you post, even if its not necessarily good, it still is. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
thanks guys for the replies... poe-last i heard from littlewing she left because of some differances here and what not, but then she cam back but i was not online for a while and not sure where she is...hope she comes back... lexy-yeah, that was how it was supposed to be, i amtalking about me and hoe i feel about 'her'...'her being language and how it has been destroyed... Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hey eor, message on my thread. poe |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
well now that I know the perspective you were writing from, it makes a lot more sense. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
http://b28.ezboard.com/bsaltydreamsbook2 Try this eor. |
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