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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-08-02 09:50 PM


kiss the scorpion
end it quick
hold asp to lips
slithering silence
seeping death
ending in agony
sufferings twist
then passing on
to numb bound bliss

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
~K~
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since 2004-07-27
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1 posted 2004-08-04 04:31 AM


I like this one even better than the other one!
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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2 posted 2004-08-04 09:05 PM


I really like this..

Short but bittersweet. Sort of.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-08-04 09:20 PM


Thanks -- you wouldn't believe the story behind this one   But, that's how I felt at the time, like just end it now . . .

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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