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Dark Poetry #4

You love the one you hurt the most

~K~
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since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-08-01 05:02 AM

purple is my
favorite color
she insists
inviting my fists
to make their way
across her flesh

she is already dead
and waits for me
to resurrect her
from one hell to another
I give her everything
she asks for

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2004-08-02 12:20 PM

I enjoyed this write of yours. Especially the first stanza.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-08-02 01:50 AM

That was powerful. And I understood it. I felt it. It's sad, but, wow, I really like the way you write.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

~K~
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since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

3 posted 2004-08-03 04:53 AM

Thanks so much for your comments! I think this is about as dark as it gets for me!

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-08-05 02:43 PM

wow, powerful...at first i had to think for a miniute to get it, and then i read it again...

This is sad....the first stanza was probably my favorite, but the last was pretty powerful too.

Amazing write...

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2004-08-06 03:06 PM

from one hell to another
hmmmm...and how there seems to never be a wasted line. each one is is so potent...
GREAT..writing.

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

6 posted 2004-08-08 09:34 AM

Thank you very much.

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