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Hole In My Heart
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Hole In My Heart |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
A hole in my heart, Where love passes through, No light at the end, And no material left to patch it up, This hole, Big enough for an eye to look through, And see everything I lied about, Bleeding to death, From the glass shards you pulled out, No time to survive, Moving too fast, Through life, The hole, resembling the moon I once gazed up at, And wished to visit, Press your eye against my heart, And see everything I kept a secret from myself, Tell me what I mean, The continuous stabbing of the wound, Is breaking my heart. No more dreams of moons, Just satire of my thoughts and memories. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
breaking hearts is the one thing that never fails you you learn a new song or you just get sucked under |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
~K~ gave a perfect response..so i echo him and i add how much i feel this... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I too feel this -- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
sigh amazing as usual ur writing is so................ i dunno the word for it........... i geuss majestic wod fit but it wasnt wat i was lookin for. anyway this poem is great wat else can i say? loveandampathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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