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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
This test that starts with desire And leads to passion roasting fire A push from the heart Make an adjustment Such cruelty awaits Dirt smudge and failure The little me inside Confidently presses All around these voices Focus forget strain No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
huh? lol. cryptic write here, but nice rhyming.  talk to ya later dude.- Bon Running out of pain |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I've always liked how you write kind of choopy. "dirt smudge and failure" I liked this... |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
you have a distinct style, that is sort of striking and odd. It's very good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanx. I guess I'm sorta unique. lol. GIS No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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