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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
I shan't think i will explain this one, it's very much to do with my life and things i do. Enjoy. (hopefully) In the echo of We are but lost In the reasoning this moon is boxed Preventing me From being clear This syndicated memory Which I now behold consuming me... Feel the purpose As it is now yours We shall not behold All of what's undone I face my eye into the sun We'll never be so lost As when this moon Is boxed... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I love this. Very kool. kissa |
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Defective Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 73Salisbury NC |
I love this and Im so glad you decided to start posting again. I have always looked forward to reading from you when I read this forum and I hope you keep posting  Kristi |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
The imagery is absolutely dilectable. I loved it. I felt a bit of paradise in that, but that may just be my thwarted perception of your poem. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
ive read this about 5 times now, and think ive finally understood what it is you are saying....then again, i may just be projecting my own circumstances... nonetheless... if this is going where my mind is taking it..its awesome... any other context... its still a very enjoyable poem. |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
i really love poetry like this, it not only allows each reader to develop their own meaning of it.....it actually demands it, that is how good it is. bravo. and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmm... I liked the idea of this. It was very...refreshing. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
I'd really like to hear your guys' interpretations of this poem, it would be very refreshing and pleasant to see them. So please post them or e mail them to me or something. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
check your email, i sent my interpretation |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
hmmm I haven't recieved it yet... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
ok, i see now that youve recieved it thanks for that |
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