Dark Poetry #4 |
Why Can't I |
yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Why can't I make you happy? I want so badly to make you smile And yet I Can't seem to make you want me The way I want your eyes within me While I walk alone Sometimes I see your Shadow walk near me And I wonder what it would be like to be In your arms Your arms can hold me Me in spite of myself While my life seems to be lived in fear of companionship I still can't stand to be lonley So I wonder Why can't I make you love me? I want so badly to touch you with my heart But still I Sit in the darkness Enveloped in tiresome want Waiting for just a glimpse of what Makes me start to cry I love the way your eyes unknowingly love me Yet somehow I still feel this emptiness When I'm in your presence In my shrouded life's feigned sunshine So why can't I... Live for you tomorrow? Because I can't live for myself Today Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. [This message has been edited by yv (07-21-2004 09:34 PM).] |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Oh wow. That sorta brought tears to my eyes. It was so sad. I could relate so much. Especially right now. Amazing write. Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
i relate to this all too well. but i have come to the conclusion that i'm not ment to love and no one is ment to love me. loved the poem. "alone yet unafraid to hurt. i go through every day trying to find my way. where is the light. where is my fight. is this how it ends?" |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
You are very talented yv. This is just another really good one from you. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very good poem, the ending is quite sad. I can relate to this. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Oh Spritrider, if only you could know the happiness that can come with sweet sorrow. You must in your heart of hearts believe that someday love is bound to take your breath away. Thank you all for your loving words and I wish to further explore the dark side of love so as I may eventually find the light. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
First one of yours I have read. Its beautiful and sad both. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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