You Killed apart of me tonight and left the frozen air to finish the job

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Dark Poetry #4

You Killed apart of me tonight and left the frozen air to finish the job

Sweetest Sorrow X
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since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-07-09 04:46 PM

i have no energy
all life is drained from me
this is how life is when im lonely
in this depression im trapped
seems like nothing can set me free

I hope your sleeping good at nights....
Knowing I never sleep at all

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2004-07-10 02:37 PM

I share your thoughts quite often. Let time do the healing.

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-07-11 03:11 AM

Thank you for putting what many feel into words.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

3 posted 2004-07-11 11:52 AM

Nice title, short poem that was to the point. This was good. Really good.

~J.Lynn

There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without.

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2004-07-12 06:09 AM

stunning

i relate totally.
im sry ur going thru this. i know how you feel

short and simple. but with so many emotions and feelings lurking beneath the surface that you have to peel away the words to find what it really says

i love it

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Purple Poet On Wheels
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since 2002-06-21

Posts 145
Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA

5 posted 2004-07-13 11:44 AM

My friend feels the same way

Vote Kerry/Edwards

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2004-07-14 02:12 AM

I agree, short yet very effective. I enjoyed it a lot. Hope your not feeling as much pain as your poem illustrates.

Best, Tomer

yv
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

7 posted 2004-07-26 06:16 PM

In every word written there is a story worth 10,000 words. Nothing resonates more than poet who writes what the heart feels and nothing more. Masterful write.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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