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Wicked Enticer |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Wicked Enticer Tinkling laughter, green tendrils flow snakelike over naked shoulders, Arms temptingly close invite me to her sparkling, rippling haven. Look away. Look anywhere. One last glance into mocking,irresistable eyes, drawn like a magnet as cold wet arms hold me tight I gasp for air we descend to her watery paradise. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cusick~ This caught me ... pulling me down~ VERY well done~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Marge for yor reply luv, Maggie |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Marge pinned this perfectly, it was just like being pulled down, under the tide. Well composed piece here, I enjoyed it.  ~Alicia |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Alicia, glad that you found it interesting. Luv, Maggie |
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