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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Empty, hollow, dried up inside the warmth is slowly cooling the soft side that once shined so bright is fading slowly away as I watched the sun setting on the horizon last night I got chills because I saw faint, almost scary likenesses to my heart. and all the good it used to hold and all the love it had to give and all the warmth there used to be all the things that made me, me. I saw them in the sun last night What scares me is is that I always wanted that when it wasnt there I always kept my head up knowing it would come again now... like the glorious colorful light in the evening sunset... even the want is fading. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is amazing! I have read it 3 times now and pull something different each time....yes exactly how poetry should be! There's a place I like to hide-open your mind to me-Visualise your dream- Record it in the present tense, I am smiling next to you, in silent lucidity |
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Theory Junior Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 23N. CA. USA |
"like the glorious colorful light in the evening sunset... even the want is fading." nice poem. thanks for the read |
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