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Dark Poetry #4

Darkness

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

0 posted 2004-07-07 01:13 AM

Engulfs my senses, darkens my soul,
makes the world grow empty and cold.
Comforts my eyes, eases my mind,
leaves me lost, forgotten, blind.

Tears my flesh, deepens my thoughts,
trying to run, but I am caught.
Soothes my eyes, clears my mind,
leaves me hanging, fullfilled and blind.

Awakens my dreams, hollows my sight,
stuck on a leash - pulled too tight.
Contains my temper, wakes my mind,
leaves me in in the darkness, lost and blind.

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2004-07-10 02:38 PM

This is a very nice piece. I enjoyed reading it.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-07-11 03:09 AM

Nice piece, enjoyable. The first I've read of yours, hope to hear more soon.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-07-12 06:18 AM

amazing

exactly how i like to think of myself. a darkness that numbs the senses.
you put it in such butiful words.

stunning

darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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