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SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

0 posted 2004-06-30 12:21 PM

"I'm Sorry"

I'm sorry your all alone
Atleast you feel like you are...

I'm sorry I can't be there to let you know I care...
Soon my apolgies I will share

I'm sorry there's nothing I can do, it's all up to you

When I heard the news I was shocked and forloren
Are you scared...I'm sorry if your being treated bad...to think of them hurting you makes me sad

Once your released I'll be glad
May be I'm a little mad, but more worried of what you'll do when you think its cool

I don't judge you but as a friend I do care and love you

Please be careful from now on or next time my best friend might be forever gone

Not to make you feel bad or guilty I just wish you were here with me

Know your in my prayers and you're not the only one who got a scare

You have people who love you and I'm sure you're confuzed about how to act

I know you're bound to be mad and probaly sad
I'm sorry I didn't know sooner that you were going under and soon to be in trouble

Try and stick it out, we're trying to help but are we being selfish

You have a mind of your own and a heart full of gold
Never give up on yourself, I'm sorry may be I didn't tell you enough...I'm proud of you for you not for what you learned at school

I miss you already and this poem I wish i could send you but I can't and I wish none of this were true

Dedicated to my best friend: Emily Hicks

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

brezee
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since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

1 posted 2004-07-01 02:00 AM

that was great...truly heartfelt..so much feeling put into it...i hope things get better for you...great write...nice way of expressing how you feel...

~*brezee*~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-07-01 01:42 PM

wow,,,cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee like alwayzz,,,keep it upp

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-07-01 05:59 PM

Wow!! I can really feel all the emotion that you put into this poem. Great job, i love this poem...

~Alli~

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

4 posted 2004-07-01 10:56 PM

Thanks Alli, sweet, and brezze for your comments. I appricate you taking the time to read my poetry. Take Care!

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

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