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Dark Poetry #4

One Too Many

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18

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nc

0 posted 2004-06-30 12:07 PM

"One Too Many"

I remember the guys chanting chug, chug, chug and the next morning that toilet I sure did hug

My eyes were glazzy, my head hazy and I said to myself man I must be crazy

The taste of the alchol brings back the memories of your death, they seem not to want to leave my head

I wonder was it something I said to bring you to the end

One of the guys came in and sat on the couch and said one too many my friend

But, I didn't care I was in total despair

I knew he was right, I'm sure I looked a sight

We had drank all night and when I woke up to the light my head hurt so bad I was sure I'd been in a fight and then I remembered you'd died.

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2004-06-30 09:46 AM

Lisa,
drinking is never the answer....as I am sure from this, you learned...
sorry you are aching over the loss of someone. It's never easy...I know this too well....hope your head and your heart, are doing better

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

2 posted 2004-06-30 02:19 PM

SEA thanks for the concern but I made this poem up it isnt about anyone! But your right drinking isnt the answer!

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2004-06-30 02:35 PM

well good then!

I am glad you are ok

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

4 posted 2004-06-30 07:52 PM

Thanks Sea!

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

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