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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. 
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Completely Faded 10/13/03 The world continues to move today, But my world has completely stopped. They say life carries on today, But my life has been utterly dropped. Everyone continues to laugh today, But my world is cloaked in silence. They say everyone smiles today, But my face shows a dreary sentence. Many are full of life today, But I’m empty of all that counts. They say many will achieve today, But I will be one who never amounts. So many have so much today, But still I have nothing. They say so many need no more today, But still I need more of something. The world continues to prosper today, But I’m one who should have been aided. They say the world carries on today, But I have completely faded. ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
It's nice a work expressive and no worries we all fade sometime but coming back makes us more stronger  P.s been away long time nice to be here and be able to read some good work. Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
You havn't faded, not when you can write poetry like this. Brilliant. Maggie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I understand |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is brilliant..... i know what its like to fade but coming back makes your light stronger than before... i love the way you put your emotions. keep up the writing Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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