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Dark Poetry #4

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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2004-05-29 10:49 AM

Through day in and day out,
Ghetto birds die,
I carry on the same fight,
Singing the same plight,

While others chill in exotic places,
Playing out fantasies for a while,
In the hood goes hungry a ghetto child,

I smile through the hardship and pain,
What I hope to gain one day is my-
Life and sanity in the right place,

Though my mind often feels deleted,
I feel compel to disagree,
Often life leaves you feeling lost,
Just have to make it through today,

I cry through many nights of terror
And I dream of falling through the cracks,
In the end I know I will make it,
For God chose me to be the one,

Struggle is what people do,
A human seeks shelter,
While a hero takes on a life,
Even with a grain of hope,

So let me close the topic of my life,
Instead focus on what I do right,
And when the final days come,
I will not fall apart like dried clay,

I will be stronger as time passes,
Staying on the right path all the time,
Wondering if heaven and hell exit,
For I live in one of them right now.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-05-31 12:39 PM

This poem was soo true so intersting,,i found it so real about life, espcially when you said ,

Though my mind often feels deleted,
I feel compel to disagree,
Often life leaves you feeling lost,
Just have to make it through today,

This part made me feel like im wwritting this,,i loved this poem and in the seventh paragraph
when you said

So let me close the topic of my life,
Instead focus on what I do right,
And when the final days come,
I will not fall apart like dried clay,

,,,these two paragraphs really showed me something,,,i dont know what to tell you more than i was in love with this poemm.!!

,, well i loved it keep it upp,, I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY PEOPLE DONT REPLY ON UR POEMS THERE AMAZING,,

peace

I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
you cant change my mind.,..

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